it was pretty good
i thought the sprites looked really good. I like sprite flashes, and this is no exception. I thought it was well animated, and it flowed well. The story was a bit dull, and the text boxes were disproportional with each other. The sound was a bit off too.
Overall it was a decent flash, and I enjoyed watching it. Expand the scenery a bit, you know take it away from that one area, make it a bit longer, or more in depth, and itll be another good Newgrounds series.